2019年10月雅思大作文真题回顾

发布日期:2019-11-27 浏览次数:449

10月大作文真题回顾

关于雅思大作文,我们先看看雅思考试中文官方网站的描述:


“在作文二中,题目中会给出一个看法、问题或议题,考生需就此进行论述。根据不同的情况,考生可能需要针对问题提出解决方法、论述和证明一个看法、对比和对照论据或看法、或者评价和反驳一个论点或观点。这篇作文的内容是学术性的,因此考生应该运用正规的学术写作的、议论性的文体。考生应注意完整地阅读并回答题目中涉及的问题。考生应在写作中注意对所有的观点加以充分论述,并且所有的观点都与论点有关。考生应严密地安排选择论点、选择最为相关的论点,并在规定的时间内清晰、准确地写作成文。


这一部分考察的是考生对一个论点进行论述、并提供清晰的论据或举例支持论点的能力。考官将对考生组织这些信息的能力以及语言使用的准确性进行评分。”


今天为大家分析最近的雅思写作大作文真题:



The world of work is changing rapidly. Working conditions today are not the same as before and people no longer rely on holding one job for life. Discuss the possible causes for these changes and give your suggestion on how people should prepare for work in the future?



题目让我们根据给出的话题做两件事:

1. dicuss possible causes 讨论原因

2. give suggestions 给出建议



范文及解析


 


(注:蓝色字体为常用搭配/短语有下划线的句子为标准句式涂黄的词/短语的功能的是让文章整体更流畅,增加文章“连贯性”方面的得分。


The nature of work has seen tumultuous change in recent years, causing people to face the prospect of having many jobs within one's lifetimeThis essay shall explore the reasons for this change along with detailing possible methods of how the workforce can prepare for the future job market.

One of the clearest causes for the change in working environments is themanifestation of automation.  With the advent of computers combined withhigh-tech machinery, many manufacturing jobs have disappeared and thistrend is set to continue whereby almost all manufacturing jobs in the futurewill be handled by computerized technology. Robotics in vehicle production is a vivid example of this automated manufacturing. Another factor in thedisappearance of  'iron rice bowl' jobs is the fluidity in economics and how companies these days follow the trend of the economy by either quickly expanding, or conversely, downsizing or even going bankruptall of which leads to a relatively unstable job market.


(题目让我们'discuss the possible causes',这一段给出了两个原因。iron rice bowl jobs 是 jobs for life的另一种表达方式。) 

 

Given this fluidity within the job marketit is clear that people need to consider their skill setIn other words, having just one skill, one expertise,no longer guarantees a person the same job or even the same career for life, and as such, should consider widening their range of skills through both experience and training. In line with this, and in conjunction with the modern digital age, the workforce, even in the most basic of jobs, will have to become computer savvy. Being able to code, for example, is almost a prerequisite for any type of office job, and in factuniversity graduates are already expected to have this skill.


(作为对前一段的回应,这一段给出了2条相应的建议。'This fuidity'对应上文的'fluidity in economics'。)

 

In conclusionour world has seen incredible technological innovations over the last couple of decades, and with the evolution of the digital agecontinuing unabatedit is evident that those who do not have the skill sets required within this modern era will inevitably be left behind.



范文里出现的常用搭配、短语和句式


咋一看这个范文比较复杂,但细细阅读就会发现除了跟“工作”相关的词汇和常用搭配外,很多句子里其实都含常用搭配、常用短语和句式。如果在备考的时候多积累这些句式,在考场上就能节约大量宝贵时间。